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    I was out taking pictures of swans and took this image of the sunset reflecting in the frozen water. The entire image is ice.

    I tried and liked Topaz Simplify to take the hard edge off the image. Additional PP in low key light and color.............

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    Jay, I love the colors and textures and the abstract feel. I would tone down the bright yellow areas and might take a small bit from the bottom.
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    Ditto what Kerry said. I also love that sweeping curve from left to right.

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    I like the bright colors. It looks as if the bright part were the actual sky, not a reflection, and I like that illusion. I would like to see the lower part less muddy in tone. Well seen and captured.

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    Very different look here. When I read it and found out it was all ice-I had to give it a second look. I thought it was water at the top. Nicely done Jay and ditto toning down that one spot that looks a bit hot. You could use a new layer with a gradient added then just mask in only the area you want to cover. I love it it has an abstract look to it that really appeals to me.:)

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    This is really cool, Jay! I never would have guessed that we were looking at ice. I agree with Kerry that a small slice off the bottom would balance this out and other than that one hot spot in the lower yellow area, the colors look great as is!

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    Thanks folks for the feedback................

    Terry, a bit off the bottom and less bright...........

    Denise, frozen wave at the top, with a different frozen water texture at the bottom. I did some split lighting to exaggerate the effect.................

    How's this?
    Last edited by Jay Sheinfield; 12-10-2010 at 02:10 PM.

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    It does look better Jay-nice work!:)

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    Jay, I love the repost. Nice abstract!

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    Jay, the repost improves an already great image. :) The colors and lighting are stunning. Excellent work!
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    Nice abstract thinking on this, repost has nice colors and angles...well done

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    Great colors and textures. The repost is a winner!

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