Originally Posted by
Roman Kurywczak
Hey Artie,
I think you composed this very nicely with the vegetation leading to the cacti and ridgeline. In avian you have the HAP.....in landscapes.....I'm the CEP (clean edge police).....not always possible, but I do know you are OK with PP'ing tweaks.....so cleaning up some of the protrusions on the frame edge (mostly the brighter rocks on the RH edge) will go a long way. Im also glad to see you minimized the sky.....but the brightest area.....almost a line...becomes quite a distraction so a tone down or patch is in order. For my tastes....a bit less brightness and more contrast in the land area( avoiding the cacti).....may also help. Overall I feel the comp is strong and a few minor tweaks will make this one shine!