Love the pose, head angle and trailing feet. The water drops add a ton. I might back off the sharpening a little. The dark blobs in the BG are a bit distracting, but not a deal breaker. With that said, I would tone down some of the darkest ones on the left. TFS
A nice clean BG would have made a huge difference on the image, but it is so cluttered I didn't even begin to address it. But hitting the three or four darker spots on the LHS probably would help out. Thanks Alex.