Hello Stu,
This little un' is very cute, so well concealed among vegetation...He probably thinks he is safe from your prying eyes. Or rather...lens!
I agree with Ken above, POV is good. Subject well positioned within the frame. I would sharpen the head of the hare a bit more if I were you. I personally feel the leaves are a little overpowering but such is his environment, this is his "home". Not much you could about it, other than stalk the poor chap until he moved to a clearing?
Stu, my eyes tend to move from the subject to the yellow flowers to the large leaves in the left corner... You could get closer (crop), I think the IQ would take it. But then you loose the "bigger picture", which is probably what you wanted in the first place. Or you could work a bit on the FG and vegetation at the top, perhaps reduce saturation and/or contrast selectively to put a slight 3D feel into the frame. I would also reduce the yellows a bit on the flowers in the upper right corner. Small touches here and there could make a difference.
Let us see what everyone says. Meanwhile, you be persistent with these hares and you will get the images you wanted. It takes practice and sometimes "stalking", LOL. Always a pleasure to see your images and I love your enthusiasm and love for those creatures, Stu
Kind regards,