I really like this.
2 very dynamic poses and there is no overlap of birds.
I really like the crop and placement of the birds in the frame.
I would darken the lower bird a bit more (the mist in front of the crane makes it look like there is uneven exposure).
I would also evict the 2 white spots at the very top of the frame (on left middle third).
I didn't notice the goose in the frame at first and I like it. Sort of like a little present for those who really look at the image.
Finally, you could clone out the tall grass right in front of the top crane's beak.
Nice frame Bill!
This is a beauty Bill, love the light and the poses. Like Gail, I might darken the lower bird a bit more, but this is definitely the type of shot I'd be looking at printing and framing