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Awesome looking gull. Love the red feet and bill. Calling pose is nice as well. Nice rock perch. Background is nice as well.
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A sublime canvas overall. Congrats. TFS
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Excellent color and pose. The open beak is a plus. The curves of the bird create a nice composition. The dark area of the background underneath the tail is a little I distracting and I would see if there was a way to blend that into lighter tones.
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Love the mood to this shot, and the red adds a nice crack to the otherwise (but nicely!) muted frame. Something is off with the bird's face. It looks washed out and less-contrasty than they rest of the image (i.e the tail and feet)
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Hi Dorian, thanks for your perceptive comment. The back of the head was a little too bright and the underside a little too shadowed, so I tried to even these out a little. Maybe that has given rise to what you see as being washed out. However, also worth considering that the feathers on these gulls are very smooth and without texture, maybe making the correction more difficult - beyond my PS skills. Thanks and best wishes, Gerald
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Hi Gerald, a very simple, yet effective portrait, good timing on the open bill.
Shooting wide open on the 200-400 I think you could have gone for a tad more DoF, just a sliver more. Good detail overall but just opening it up a bit more helps. Agree that the head feathers are smooth, but adding a Curves adjustment in the quarter tones just pulls a bit more form out, adding Contrast is a big no no and not the right route. Maybe pull the luminance back on the red, gives a bit more detail in the bill & legs I think. Like the pastel backdrop, but would have liked a tad more of the perch, it feels as if the image is falling slightly out of the frame for me.
TFS
Steve
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I love this image an wish that it were mine but that would be a trick as I have never been to NZ. The d-o-f looks absolutley perfect to me and the face and feathers look fine as well. The only thing that bugs me is the dakrer smudge below the end of the wings. Even the white border at tht top adds.
with love, artie
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Hi Steve, I always appreciate your thoughts and comments. Will attempt your suggested curves adjustment. The reds are quite 'true to life' as they really are quite strong in the breeding season.
Thanks and best wishes, Gerald
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Hi Artie, thanks for the kind comments. You really should add New Zealand to your bucket list. There are something like 93 endemic species that you won't see anywhere else. I often recall your comment about shooting gulls - in five minutes they will always be doing something special!
Best wishes, Gerald
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Hi Gerald, prior to commenting I did a revision, in that way I know my comments have foundation re PP. Rather than cluttering the post, happy to send it over if you drop me a line, albeit from a 256 sRGB file. Prior to Artie’s comment I did remove the ‘smudge’ too and it definitely improves the file, worth a revisit if you have time. Reds no problem, it was just a suggestion, as Saturation can get ramped up, smothering subtle detail.
Current out, back in a few hours.
cheers
Steve