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    1D MK 4, 700mm, 1/20 @ 5.6, 800ISO, EV +1 1/3.

    More definition in the bird this time. I fine this very abstract.

    Thanks Tom

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    Tom, I like the definition of the moorhen better on this blur. You might want to tone down the head just a little bit and maybe just a very slight crop from the top which would eliminate the darkish space at the upper right corner. Blurs are fun - I hope we see more from you (I liked your website).
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    Tom, There is more definition in this one and Cheryl makes a good suggestion. I might try panning with the bird a little on your next try. Beautiful soft color palette.

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    Hi Tom, I like that there is a little more definition this time. Denise and Cheryl both make good suggestions. A little more panning with the bird will yield even more definition.

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    Tom, this one is more appealing to my eye; Cheryl and Denise offer good suggestions. As noted by Denise, it is a beautiful color palette...keep them coming!

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