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    I can't believe it has been over a year since I've posted here! How time flies.... I have recently been making more time for myself to write - so here is my latest poem. Some of my poems don't have titles, and I'm not sure if this one ultimately will either. But if you have an idea for a title, please do share - I would love to hear suggestions. This remains the only place on the internet that I share my poems - some day perhaps I'll start working on some other method with which to share them with a wider audience (an ebook?). Please let me know what you think - I like to consider my poems never quite finished.



    Flitting, fleeting, filtering light
    Stirs the needles and blades
    The forest is slowly coming alive
    Quick now! Before it fades

    My footsteps send wildflower seeds to the air
    Dancing and twirling in space
    Birthing a carpet of blazing displays
    Shooting stars, lupine, and lace

    Glades beckon forth, glistening with
    The dew from an angel's kiss
    What have I done to earn such reward?
    What karma has granted me this?

    To protect you, oh Forest, for my grandchild's child
    Is not a noble or lofty goal
    For your greatest resource that I selfishly take
    Is nourishment for my soul

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