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    Another image from our trip last weekend. This time a horizontal format...with no sun star...I love the colours inherent in the rocks in this area.

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    PS: Jay, I know you will call for a crop off the sky of about 50%, I just liked the 50/50 split here for some reason...might post a cropped version too though...
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    Hi Morkel,

    Beautiful image, especially the colors in the foreground. Do you have any more at the bottom? I would have angled the camera down more, (or done a vertical mosaic), less of the sky at the top and more of the foreground. The rocks cut off at the bottom ask for more down lower, at least to my eye. But either way a lovely image.

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    Thanks Roger. I shot quite a few variations, but as far as I can remember the ground was sloping upward quite a lot here, meaning tilting downwards invariable meant including tripod legs in the frame (especially at 14mm ). The light also only 'peaked' for a minute or 2 as usual...

    Will scrounge through the images and process a few more sometime...
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    Hi Morkel, very nice. Love the colours in the sky and the rocks are very cool. I can see why you are drawn to them. For an alternate version I would crop not quite 1/3 off the top, which would have the whitish clouds on the right extending up to the top right corner - after the crop. Hope that makes sense. Look forward to more from this location.

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    Besides the above comments Morkel I suggest more "structure" or "local contrast" in the clouds to see how you like that.

    The FG is inviting and beautifully colored - you have just the perfect light for it.

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    Hi Morkel, I like the 50/50 crop, but would crop off those very light spots in the clouds along the edge of the frame, or clone them out.
    Great light and colors and very attractive lichens and rocks.

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    Thanks for your comments Andrew, Robert and Jerry...


    Robert, your LCE suggestion worked well, don't know why I didn't tease those details out of there to begin with...
    So here is a repost incorporating Robert's tweak and Andrew's crop suggestion!
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    Hi Morkel, yep that's the crop I was thinking about. Great repost!

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    Hi Morkel,

    I really like your repost. With the change in sky, I no longer feel the need to see lower. Interesting how that perception has changed by cropping the sky!

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    Morkel - The repost rocks (pun intended)! Nicely done.

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    Loved the colors and the details on the rocks!

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    Thanks for the kind comments, folks! Glad you liked the repost...
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    the repost gets my vote too, it has more depth with crop and sky tweak, way cool!!!!!!!!!

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    Morkman !!!! Great work , blending master it will seem

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    That's awsome. Very nice composition and colors. I love the rock texture and the lichens.

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    Hi Morkel,
    Your repost is so much better than the original. The change in composition makes a big difference and the foreground rock lichens are a definite interest point.
    Well done and thanks for sharing,
    Mark.

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    Thanks guys!!
    Strange how a slight change in perspective can change how a photo tells its story...
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