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    gary rouleau
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    Yellowstone NP as the sun sinks into the horizon.

    Canon EOS-1D Mark II N
    Lens (mm): 160
    ISO: 100
    Aperture: 8
    Shutter: 1/400
    Exp. Comp.: +1.0

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    Gary,
    I know that your exposure was reflective of the time of day--just as the sun was going down--but I felt that it was so dark that the colors were losing their separation. I lightened it up a bit and separated the colors somewhat in LAB. (Alfred Forns and Robert Amoruso inspired me to go out and buy Photoshop LAB Color: The Canyon Conundrum by Dan Margulis). Compositionally, I might prefer to see more of the top (where the trees have been cut), and also drop the bottom a bit so that the shape of the white snow (at the extreme bottom edge) is allowed to take form.

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    David

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    Robert Amoruso
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    Hi Gary,

    Nice scene. I like the luminosity of the light on the FG shore on the right works as an anchor to the darker portions of the scene. I agree with David's work on the processing and cropping suggestions.

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    Nice image to start but David made a good improvement

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    gary rouleau
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    Good day,
    David thanks, it works for me. That is a good book.

    Cheers
    gary

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    Roman Kurywczak
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    Like the corrections,
    Roman

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