Originally Posted by
Julie Kenward
Jon, I see two things you could work on here. First, he's pretty well in the center of the image. I'd take some off the right side (since he's pointing his body to the left) and get him more in the left 1/3 of the frame.
Also, I'd check the red channel - looks awfully saturated and there appears to be a loss of detail in the reds. If you have a spike on the red channel's histogram, pull the color back a bit until you can see more detail.
He's certainly colorful, isn't he? And the BG sets him off nicely!