Bill, can I get you to post an unedited image of this? Something about this looks off and I can't tell if it's oversharpened or the server did something funky to it when you uploaded it. I'd like to compare it to the first post.
I prefer color and contrast of the unedited image. Your PP really flattened out the image and gave it an artificial feel. Try going for a more subtle levels adjustment. Straighted and cropped like your original upload and I think it would be great.
May be a B/W version? this is a nice image as is and the place is too. Give it a try in B/W, you might discover that this is a perfect image for that matter.