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    Keith Rawlins
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    Default Big dam sunset

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    Big dam in the kruger park
    Camera Canon 1dsmII
    Lens Canon 24-105 is usm
    FL 47mm
    Speed 1/250
    App F/9.0
    Flash Off
    Iso 400

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    Alfred Forns
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    Hi keith 1!!

    Love those strong colors and silhouetted trees !!!! I like the slight separation in the middle ground land to left form bg Might suggest taking a little from the bottom Would like seeing the shore line a little lower

    The one tree in the middle is sort of on the way Not sure what to do with it Also if you had the camera on a tripod would have tried going for more dof Would like to see the trees sharp !!!! Overall one fine image that I would be proud to have !!!

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    Robert Amoruso
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    I would agree with Alfred's comments and suggestions on this one Keith. I would add that the tree on the right has branches touching the edge. If possible, generally best not to have elements of the composition intersecting the edges. Nice work with the color in this one.

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    beautiful colors, keith. nice work. nothing i can say more than robert and al.

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    gary rouleau
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    Pretty shot Keith, well done. Nits same as above.

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    Keith Rawlins
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    Thanks guys for comments and suggestions

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