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    Default Misty taste of Moonshine ;)

    Although Moonshine is a kind of Alcohol and the lines are from a John Denver song, I thought the title might be apt here.

    Canon EOS 1000D, Canon EF-S 18-55mm @18mm (Canon Remote Trigger used )
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    Hi Bibhav,
    I like the colors and mood here but wish the top of the RH tree was entirely in the frame. The clouds have a nice fell and look to them due to the long SS. Glad to see it didn't blur the moon. and while it isn't in the trees repositioning to get it a touch further away may have been preferable. Nicely thought out and handled pretty well.

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    the cloud blurs are awesome and the moon looks great. i just wished the moon wasnt so centered in the frame. i really like that the tree is angled and agree with roman. i think just moving around to repostion the moon would have made it stronger.

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    Hi Bibhav, Agree with above comments but thought I would give you another idea.

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    Thanks for the comments guys.
    I like your idea Dave. Will try it out.

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    Hi Bibhav, Nicely conceived and executed, I think Dave's crop eliminates some unneeded space and strengthens your concept.
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    Very nice atmosphere, a bit too much darkness on the left i think.

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