Results 1 to 11 of 11

Thread: Just One Bleeding Heart

  1. #1
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Millington Md.
    Posts
    2,513
    Threads
    365
    Thank You Posts

    Default Just One Bleeding Heart

    Attached Images Attached Images
     
    One of my favorite flowers from my garden.
    Nikon D-300
    1/125 sec f5.6
    ISO 800
    Tamron 90 mm f/2.8 Macro
    blended bg a bit-Thank you Jules

  2. #2
    Julie Kenward
    Guest

    Default

    And a lovely job you did on the BG, Bob! That is one perfect bleeding heart! I think you might be able to compose this a little better, though. Try bringing the stem on the left in from the bottom instead of the side. (It always feels more 'natural' if the stem enters from the bottom of the frame.) Also, if you can't get the two buds to be in focus, you might try one of two things - blend two frames together with the buds in focus on one and the heart in focus on the other...OR...cut the frame so just the stem and heart remains.

    It's not that there is anything wrong with the buds being OOF but, for some reason, I find it distracting here - maybe because they are so close to the focal plane? If they were more in the BG I don't think I'd think twice about them but here they bug me. Let's see what the others say...

    Overall, it's still a really lovely image. That heart steals the show!

  3. #3
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    New Jersey
    Posts
    2,269
    Threads
    186
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Agree with Jules on the perfect bleeding heart! Nice exposure, very nice light on this one. My only critique would be to not have the main subject so dead center.

  4. #4
    Ramesh Adkoli
    Guest

    Default

    I liked the Beautiful colors and soft light here, Bob. Agree with Nick, the flower being in dead center takes away a possibly stronger composition. TFS.

    regards,
    ramesh

  5. #5
    BPN Member Stuart Frohm's Avatar
    Join Date
    Feb 2008
    Location
    Michigan
    Posts
    191
    Threads
    23
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I understand the point about placement off center, and many of my photos have benefited from off-center placement.

    But I have no problem with the placement in the photo "Just One Bleeding Heart."

    And I like both the slight diagonal and the V of the stem at left and also the V of the stem above the bleeding heart's stem.

    Bravo! Thanks for posting the photo.

  6. #6
    Mike Moats
    Guest

    Default

    I'm going to agree with Stu on this one. I think it balances well with the subjects right and left. I do agree some more focus on the buds would be nice.

  7. #7
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Dec 2009
    Location
    Mifflin, TN
    Posts
    2,799
    Threads
    379
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I also don't mind the flower in the center. The stem and bud balance it out nicely but I do wish the bud was in focus.

  8. #8
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Sep 2008
    Location
    The Netherlands
    Posts
    1,991
    Threads
    192
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Nothing to add to the advice already given, but some extra compliments for your work on the BG, the lovely colors and lighting.

  9. #9
    BPN Viewer
    Join Date
    Aug 2008
    Posts
    1,109
    Threads
    156
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    I also agree with the comments given, and I give super credit for that soft silky backround.

  10. #10
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Mar 2008
    Location
    Millington Md.
    Posts
    2,513
    Threads
    365
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    Thanks so much for the comments and suggestions. I don't know how I could have gotten the buds in focus without going to a higher aperture and then I would lose the bg
    Jules...If I go with a blend ...would I not have to use the same aperture on each so the bg stays the same?

  11. #11
    Forum Participant
    Join Date
    Dec 2008
    Location
    West Nottingham, PA, USA
    Posts
    7,038
    Threads
    427
    Thank You Posts

    Default

    This flower is just perfect, and perfectly beautiful! It is mesmerizing. Simple and lovely.

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  
Web Analytics