Desmond, I like the idea here and the flower is illuminated nicely. I might crop a bit tighter if it were mine, but still leaving enough negative space to give it a sense of solitaire.
I'm with Denise on the crop...it feels a bit lost in all that darkness. You might also check your yellows - they feel very saturated to me. You might be able to pull them back just a little and get even more detail to show through.
Love the spotlit effect and agree with the excellent comments above. :)
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