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    Photographed at the Bosque Visitor Center in November 2009. Haven't gotten around to process any of my other images...

    Thanks in advance. JR

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    Great feather detail, and I like the BG color and softness. I'd add a little canvas on the left, and I'd consider removing the shadow.
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    Joerg:

    Very nice exposure with fairly harsh light. Excellent detail as pointed out by Doug. For my tastes, excellent level of sharpening. Like the feet.
    Perhaps a fraction more room on the left if you have it.

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    Very nice shot. I have been looking for these little guys for a while now. I like the nice dof for the small bird. It does seem a bit tight on the left. Dave

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    I like the head angle, sharpness and BG. Another vote for a wider crop and maybe lightening of the shadow.

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    you did very well in that light condition.
    Agree with the wider crop suggestion. other then that, I like it a lot.
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    Beautiful shot of this little fellow. Great sharpness. I like the head angle.
    I agree with the others on the shadow below the bird.

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    Beautiful feather detail, and I love the complimentary BG color. Agree with adding just a tad to the left, at least. Well done.

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    Agree with the suggestions for improving the image, but you captured this bird very well. Love the detail, HA, colors and BG. Well done.

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    Just a great looking bird. I agree about the shadow, at least the little proud part
    should be easy to remove.

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    Thank you all for the kind feedback. The image is uncropped and hence no more room to the left is available. :o Should have gotten it right in the camera... :)

    Best, JR

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    Quote Originally Posted by Joerg Rockenberger View Post
    Thank you all for the kind feedback. The image is uncropped and hence no more room to the left is available. :o Should have gotten it right in the camera... :)

    Best, JR
    It is important you did not clip the tail and left just a bit of space that you could select and free-transform
    Select->Edit->FreeTransform. Then you should repair the texture which is easy here since the part in question is OOF. Here's my attempt, at the end I did few QMs on the transformed part to break any stretch marks or/and repeating patterns.

    Cheers,

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