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    Dear All
    Made this with D300, ISO 400, 18-55 at 18 mm, F8 near local waterbody

    All C & C are most welcome and much appreciated
    Harshad

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    Spectacular and dramatic sky with great cloud formation. I would clone out the white spots and would like more grounding like including the tree base.

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    Love it but dido on the few stars. Bob

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    Hi Harshad,
    For me moving the tree slightly to the left....more in the ROT position would make this stronger. I also agree on the stars as they are drawing the eye too much. Like Fabs I too may have wanted more base but it may have been too busy and uninteresting (judging by the left bottom branches).....so I would probably eliminate those branches too. Very nice colors and textures to the clouds.

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    What a dramatic sky, Harshad. Great silhouette of the tree too. Including some ground below the tree would help give the frame a base. Does it need a little CCW rotation? TFS.

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    lovely dramatic sky Harshad! Roman and Fabs have touched the main points - I also feel the clouds are bit oversharpened.
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    I like the diagonal of the clouds - always a strong composition technique. I liek the tree placement on the right as it stops to eye from going out of the frame as it follows the diagonal up. I am OK with the bottom crop as presented. I suggest cloning out the blurry stars.

    Well done Harshad.

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    here is repost
    let me know how it looks now

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    Very nice w/o the stars.

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    repost rocks Bhai.
    did you get my PM?
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