Nice detail on the feathers, but extremely tight in frame.
Wish you had included your techs to help evaluate the situation. The angle looks pretty steep, maybe going further and using a teleconverter to flatten the angle would have helped.
AJ the cropping is done to taste basically There are certain things that seem to make sense to most people
Birds very tight in frame look odd You need room for the bird
Also when the legs are covered by grass etc you still need to have room for the virtual legs
your bird positioning on both is very good Less room on back and more up front