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    You

    New air
    New sounds
    New smells
    New you

    First walk
    First talk
    First laugh
    First 2

    Then school
    Then job
    Then love
    I do

    Last words
    Last sight
    Last breath
    Last you

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    Alright, girl...no more excuses! You knocked it out of the park twice in a row! Now quit being shy and let it come.

    I feel like I just lived an entire romance in fifteen seconds. Wonderful!

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    Incredible, Denise. Your words are so evocative. What Julie said, 10 times.

    Reading this just makes the emotions bubble right up inside me.

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    Thankyou both for your kind words.

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    Beautiful, Denise. Very powerful words and image.

    LOVE your cover image as well!! Creativity oozes from you.

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    Grace, Thankyou so much for your kind words. I am so honored to be on the cover.

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    I look at your image and I see tense movement using neutral colors. It does match the words stating the cycle of life in a very eloquent and direct fashion. Much meaning within...and enjoyed immensely.

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    Dave, Thankyou for your thoughts.

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    Very nice Denise. I also like the picture.

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    Juan, Thankyou I appreciate it.

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    Denise, I'm late to the party here. I've never even looked in this forum!
    A life in 32 words... this is so simple... so eloquent... so amazing... your talents are amazing!

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    John, Thankyou for your kind words and for taking the time to comment. I appreciate it.

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