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    Stefan Jonsson
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    Beautiful image. Love the soft feel in this. Nice use of OOF elements in the frame. Have you thought of cropping further so as to keep just the 2 flowers (eliminating the 3rd towards right-bottom) in to a vertical composition...?

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    I meant a crop like this one...



    Just a matter of personal taste :)

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    Stefan Jonsson
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    Yes! Thatīs an idea, but I i thought it would be a little bit too tight.
    And Iīm in love with the square right now :-)

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    I had the same crop idea as Kaushik but also brought up the high tones using a levels adjustment - just giving it a little more light right at the top of the main flower.

    Lovely image either way...the overall feel of the piece really makes you think of spring breaking through!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Julie Kenward View Post
    I had the same crop idea as Kaushik but also brought up the high tones using a levels adjustment - just giving it a little more light right at the top of the main flower.

    Lovely image either way...the overall feel of the piece really makes you think of spring breaking through!
    Thankīs Kaushik and Julie, Iīll go back to the picture and work... :D

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    Mike Moats
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    Hey Stefan, I have to agree with the cropped version, not that the original is not great, just think less is better here. Very cool image.

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    Stefan Jonsson
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    Ok, ok, ok :)
    Made the format standing, popped up the background and adjusted away some magenta.


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    Gus Cobos
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    Hi Stefan,
    Your final repost is beautiful, I love the color rendition and the compositional balance...well done...:cool:

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    Ed Vatza
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    The crops are fine and the image (cropped) looks great. But sometimes you have to stand by your original vision. As presented, I think the square composition looks great as well.

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    Stefan Jonsson
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    Thank you Ed, know what you mean, personally I like the first version best, but you know new to the forum and so on...

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