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    Alfred Forns
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    Can't think of a better place to post my 10k than right here in ETL, its just like sharing with family !!!!

    This fine image is not new, was made about three years ago during Hurricane Katrina. I had lost power and had nothing much to do, getting bored so I decided to photograph.

    My first thought turn to settings, decided to go with a low ISO because form experience the image would have rich shadows and want to keep the noise down. Also wanted lots of dof so I placed the camera on a sturdy tripod assuring sharpness with the long exposure. Settled on f 16.

    Did take my time in framing so I would not loose any pixels and could make a fine print. The PhotoShop works was interesting and went full out for optimum quality..... even pixelated my Gaussian blur then feather it 100% I hope all my hard work shows !!!

    Canon 1DsMk2
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    Av -1/3
    No flash

    Comments welcome and much appreicated

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    My beloved husband, you are a RIOT :)

    I think you should clone out the small distraction on the UL and crop a bit off the right for a stronger composition.

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    Is it better now Fabs :)

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    Maybe try a vertical crop and do away with the distraction in the UL that Fabs mentioned.....:)

    Bill

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    Perfect Al . . . .

    "Art is something we want, not something we need" ~ Emile Zola

    You're a riot young man . . .

    Thanks for sharing your 10,000th. post ~ out of sight :cool:

    Uncle Gus
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    :My dear friend congratulations on your 10,000 post . It is definitely one of the best images I have seen of Katrina and your techs are superb. It is so well composed and artfully captured . You are the best and we miss you:confused:

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    Re-post is much better...Agree with the vertical crop, give it a try

    And thanks for all 10,000 posts!

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    Congratulation Al!! I don't think anyone pointed out that it needs a little sharpening as well, otherwise a fine image. I hope I can do something as good as this one day!!

    Inspiring:)

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    Much better in the repost. The monochromatic palette is really what takes this one over the top!

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    Congratulations Al!! Your pic looks like you are part of South Africa's power - saving ( cut at any time!!) :D:D

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    Wow ..I have taken the identical images a couple of times. But yours looks better for some reason.
    Congrats and Cheers
    Gail

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    Al,
    This should really be in "Out of the Box" wait I'll start a new forum, "Out of Your Mind"!

    The only thing I can offer is while I love the composition and clean background, the shadows were a little blocked up.

    Here is the histogram after my slight adjustment.

    Congratulation Partner!
    That's almost 10x the posts I have?

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    Congrats, Alfred! Far be it from me to attempt a critique of the master's work. The fact that I don't "understand" the image only proves to me that my skills (such as they are) simply need lots more work. Seriously, Alfred, I take this opportunity to thank you for ALL your critiques of my posts. They have been very helpful! And when I get to 10,000 perhaps I'll be able to capture a similarly beautiful (?) image.

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    do i see a full moon in there?:D:D:eek:

    big congrats!! and many thanks from jill and myself for all the hard work you have put in for all of us!!!

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    Thanks for the histogram Darth !!! I think its a little different than Artie prefers :) Just a little more to the left than it should !!! :)

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    Now this is totally unacceptable Maestro...I see snow and noise every where. You clipped the wings on your subject, the capture angle is too steep, the color rendition is the pits. The eye is out of focus, I see dust spots all over the background. You even shot with the sun in your face...hmmm...I think its back to bird school 101, and fundamentals of photography 102....:eek:;)

    Don't worry...I'm right behind you...

    A BIG CONGRATS MAESTRO on the big "10"...:cool:

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    Alfred, Congrats on your milestone-I,m sure every person posting has benefited from your insight-So thankyou for all your posts!!

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    Hi Alfred,
    Congratulations on the 10000 post. And thank you for all the help.
    Would you call this a low key image??

    Adams

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    Hi Alfred,
    Congrats on the 10,000th!........that was even hard to type!
    Laugh all you want.......but MOMA (museum of modern art in NYC).......has 3 canvases......at least 12 foot by 4 foot......of the exact same thing.........and they are considered priceless. My recommendation.........go for it!...............there is a precedence!
    ........but I do want the 15% commision on priceless!
    Hope to see you and Fabs in a few weeks!

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    I simply cannot believe you didn't leave room for the virtual feet.

    Rooky.


    :):D:):D:)

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    That image looks too busy to me. Could you clean that up? :D

    Congrats Al !!!

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    Al, I have only been posting for several months, but I can't believe that all the "experts" haven't mentioned that you should have moved a little to the left when shooting this image. I'm surprised that someone of your caliber wouldn't have known this. Congrats on your 10,000th. Looking forward to the next 10,000. Hopefully I'll be with you the day you photograph it.

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    I'm looking at this on a calibrated monitor, and it seems a bit soft to me. I think it needs some sharpening! LOL

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    Big Congrats my friend. And Thank you and your lovely wife.

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    That is funny! Thanks for all of your time and excellent critiques.

    Best Regards,

    Phil

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    I think the HAP are going to get you on this one.

    Congrats and heres to 10,000 more

    John

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    Congratulations Alfred. Most of us are somewhat behind you !! Thanks for the devotion to improve us all.

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