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    Julie Kenward
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    Homegrown zinnias
    Passed across a neighbor's fence
    They stand transplanted
    In a simple kitchen glass.

    Soaking up
    Their share of late day sun
    She snaps their portrait
    A forever memory of summer.

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    Fabs Forns
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    Simple and sweet, it speaks of friendship and sharing, the small pleasure of everyday living. Well done :)

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    Ooooh - I got goose-bumps and a little misty, too! That's beautiful, Jules!

    Amy D.

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    Lance Warley
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    I think it's great.

    What makes it special for me? The late day sun mapped directly to the late time of this summer. You've got the day ending with the summer ending.

    It's workin', big time.

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    Julie Kenward
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    Thank you everyone. I don't venture into poetry very often but this simple portrait of my friend's zinnias really seemed to need some simple words. I'm so happy you liked it.

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    Gus Cobos
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    Excellent Julie,
    I like it. simple and elegant...:cool:

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    This makes me feel warm and fuzzy all over....Lovely image , lovely poem. Thanks for sharing.

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    Beautiful on all counts. Thanks!

    -Noel

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