Nicely presented composition, with a clean background and good exposure.
It could use a little more contrast and another round of sharpening. Great to find them together, they are such beautiful birds!
Two nice subjects and a good exposure but the two head angles are fair and not so good (the rear bird). Ideally each head would be turned slightly towards you.
I got rid of a few extra branches, did Levels and Curves ADjs. Enjoy.
Later and love, artie
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Lovely to get two of these beautiful birds in one image, especially on such photogenic perches. Artie's repost looks terrific. Agree with Danial that a little more room on the right would be good if you have it.
These are such beautiful birds that I hope to get a chance to photograph some day. In this case I think Artie has done a good job on the post processing tips.
I like the positioning of the birds and the lovely background. I really like the repost. I agree it's great to get two of these pretty little birds in the one image.