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    Here's another image from my time at Santa Clara Ranch. Seed was used to in the setup

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    Nicely composed, I am guessing this is a set up..... there are a couple of areas where I think the branch has been snapped. I would be inclined to lift the darks, some are inky black and no detail. The hint of colour variation in the background enhances the presentation.

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    hi Kurt .... attractive bird on nice perch with a good posing and killer bg , nothing more to wish for imho.

    basically all does look good to me , love the color palette . personally I think you can afford a touch more brightness and try to coax out more detail if the bird does show them in real life . if there bird does have the blacks that deep I would leave it as is .

    killer shot , nice work and tfs Andreas

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    I love it when almost everything in an image is in the same plane of focus, ( except the background). Exposure, sharpness and image design-- spot on.

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    I like it. Addressed a few broken barely noticeable broken branches, lightened the face a bit and sharpened it with a Contrast Mask. I only wish the lens had been pointed down an inch or so to get the bottom of the Y-perch.

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