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    Default Brown Pelican

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    Carmel River slough, Carmel California.
    D500, 500pf, f5.6, 1/2500, iso2500
    PP in Capture One, Affinity photo.
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    Dan Kearl

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    I like the frame Dan. Really pretty colors in the lower bkg.

    Nice flight angle and dof looks adequate. Solid eye contact.

    I definitely think you have some room to punch up the mid tones and even a little room at the lower end of the histogram. I could see a touch more noise reduction, selectively too.

    Otherwise, I might remove the black tree/blob at right for effect and you could consider moving the subject up a touch.

    Lots of potential here!!

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    Ditto Brian. Just about a perfect flight pose for a pelican - love the colours on this individual.

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    A nice sharp flight pose. Agree about amping it up some.

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    Super image, it looks a little anaemic to me, here's an alternative for your consideration WDYT?

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