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Lovely capture David. Might have named this one "Peek-a-boo" Definitely giving you the eye. Lovely detail, HA, sharpness and smooth BG. For me I would take some off the bottom...up to just above the lower white oof patch, and a small amount from the top and RHS, whilst maintaining the vertical crop you want.
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Neat capture. Thanks the lord for the lawnmower! Those were some thick blades of grass. You might consider eliminating the o-o-f white area in the center foreground. And the two white areas abutting the thrasher's back are also distracting.
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The low angle is great. Also like that pose and the framing. Love the greens.
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Hi David ... lovely low POV and the " peek-a-boo " effect well executed .
Only thing i might change is the tonality in the subject , just a bit more depth or " Ooomph" might help
TFS Andreas
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A fine low angle shot, I too think it needs a little more tonal contrast and I think I would reduce the sharpening a little also. The red colouration in the head looks great but I think it could be shown to even better effect.
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David, neat concept you presented here. I love the eye that jumps out in the green canvas.
The bkg is super sweet. Light seems nice and even.
Looks like you have plenty of detail so I might suggest pulling back sharpening a bit. Might also look at reducing the brightness of the cut edges of some of the grass blades.
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