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    I captured this image early last Thursday morning at Ft. Desoto County Park in Pinellas County, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Post processed in Lightroom Classic, Photoshop CC 2020 and Neat Image for noise reduction when needed
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    The lighting is really nice, and you avoided shadows altogether - so that's good. However, the bird is a bit high to get direct eye contact, and the intersecting beak and wing aren't ideal. The bird also looks soft; I;m not sure if that results from a focusing issue or heavy crop.

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    The light looks nice. But going to have to agree the bird does look soft here.

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    EXP is good as it the image design. Agree with the sharpness issues mentioned above. In addition, the bird has already turned away from you. Lastly, in a perfect world the near wing would have been fully extended.

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