Sharp from one tail tip to the other. Great pose on both and nice low angle. Love the head feathers. Maybe a small amount of work on the left birds eye would maybe be only suggestion. Good luck on that dance. Can't wait to see it... TFS
I like the interaction, exposure, subtle but not bland background.
Dof for both birds on this type of shot is almost impossible when they are so far out of plane with each other, but still the interaction makes it an engaging shot.