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Hi Randy I personally would have a little bit more room around the bird especially in the front to show direction.
Your whites are ok but some of your blacks are a bit to solid, nice background and just enough wing blur to show motion.
Things to improve on would be a bit more shutter speed and sharpness, also I would remove the small second highlight on the lower part of the eye.
Thanks for sharing.
-Tim
Last edited by Tim Foltz; 08-18-2018 at 06:54 PM.
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Good stuff by Tim. For me, lots more room around the bird would be much better. The image does not appear to be accurately focused on the eye. Some flash would help with the solidly blocked up black but that would limit your shutter speed. In short, hummers with natural light are not easy.
with love, artie
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Thanks Artie (if I may) and Tim for your suggestions. I will try and incorporate these suggestions in the next submission. I really do want to improve my skills.
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