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I like the composition and the pose, it may be me but the image looks a little lacking in colour, slightly bright, I think it needs a little more pop.
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Pretty neat. Like how you have a nice view of the left paw and its claws. The details look nice as well.
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Nice standing bear Rachel with good detail. Would have preferred a sliver more on the LHS, but no deal breaker. A bit more pop, personal taste, but I would have thought the chest area left to right would have been a fraction darker and more in shade. Nice to have the subject so close.
TFS
Steve
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Thanks Gabriela, Jon, John and Steve for the kind comments. As always, much appreciated. Steve - I was trying to go a little less contrasty and with more detail in shadow areas based on comments on some of my other bear images. I can go a bit darker on the shadowed area of the chest.
Thanks again,
Rachel
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Steve - I was trying to go a little less contrasty and with more detail in shadow areas
If it's in shadow then I would leave it, goes back to backlit bears. Yes, you can control 'contrast' in PP, but it looks flat and lacks that tonal range I would expect, therefore I would leave it as shot Rachel. I could be wrong, but it may look more 'natural'.
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Thanks Steve. Check your email
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Rachel Hollander
Here's a rp following some suggestions that Steve and Jon made. WDYT?
Magic!! Love it
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What a beauty Rachel - I like this one a lot, especially your changes in the repost which has helped this in my view. I did see this a day or two ago and never got around to commenting but had a similar view to Jon. I like the setting and pose, especially the great detail visible in the paws. Composition works for me too.
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Fantastic image Rachel. The RP is my vote. a little darker in the shadow is more realistic. I'd give the eye a little more sharpening. Like Steve, I'd like a little more room on the LHS. Where was it taken? Loi
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Hi Rachel -- Your RP has made this one an incredible frame , your best from the series so far IMO. Superbly done, Just loved it ! TFS !
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Thanks Jon, Glenn, Loi and Haseeb. Loi, this was taken in Lake Clark N.P. in Alaska at Silver Salmon Creek Lodge.
Thanks again,
Rachel