Very nice banking capture, William. Like the wing stretch and fanned tail, and that you kept the reflection in. Love the beads of water clinging to her belly.
Pretty pose. I like the feel of the image very much. I would take some canvas off of the left and add more to the right as the bird seems a bit centered to me. Also if you are going to include the reflection I would give some more room below so the edge of the reflection is not on the edge of the frame.