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Alex:
I like the hopping pose, line of wings and bill, nice control of the whites. Well done canvas extension.
The beach is a bit cluttered, but you of course have no control of that.
Cheers
Randy
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Wildlife Moderator
Hi Alex, as Randy said, nice control of the Exposure. I feel if your ethics allow, then a little bit of 'gardening' would benefit the image, especially with the removal of the two bits of wood RHS near the tail and the white spots under the neck and bill.
TFS
Steve
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I don't particularly mind some gardening but just don't want it to look too unnatural / blotchy.
Much better Alex, I would also drop the Blue, your call, but the LH wing (as viewed) would look better IMHO. Why do you say 'blotchy'? If you are using PSCC 2017 then no issues, very quick & easy.
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I use content fill aware on an object surrounded by a very smooth BG I feel like the result is often piece-wise looking.
Perhaps it's not the right tool Alex, as you have many options, but dependent on the issue. I have never in my entire life run any 'smoothing' as the BKG is what it is, by doing so it can often look artificial IMHO.
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Terrific upwing position, and good handling of blacks and whites. Tough to find a clean patch of beach at The Hook. All of the debris from New York Harbor seems to wash up there.
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Nice wings up pose. Whites look good and I am glad you did a bit of clean up.
The green vegetation at the top adds a nice pop of color.
Gail
Last edited by gail bisson; 06-19-2017 at 05:34 AM.
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I like the raised wings and the exposure looks good too. It is getting harder and harder to find an area of clean beach anywhere. My best suggestion would be to arrive near sundown or sun up on a rising or falling tide and photograph the birds in the flat areas where the waves wash up. Typically there is very little if any debris there and also very little shells. I will post a shot soon of an Oystercatcher I took at Nickerson (beach above that line is cluttered, dirty, full of foot prints and tire marks) where you can see what I mean. But that is the best way to avoid the debris.
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