I like where you were going with this, but I agree that more room in front (perhaps doubling the current amount of space in front of the bill), and a better head angle would have been advantageous here. I'm not a huge fan of the many specks in the water. Nice greens, and I like the foot rising out of the water.
Thank you for your comments. I agree regards the space on the right, but it was approaching the bank, so I will try extending the canvas. The white flecks are down from the reeds and grasses on the bank and although I have cleaned the worst of them I see what you mean.