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    Taken this weekend in Riverside, California.
    Nice sunset unfortunately the result of LA area wildfires.
    For the bird crowd, below me is where David Salem does his magic.....

    Handheld with 70-200 f2.8, nikon D610, f8, 1/2500, iso400

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    Hi Dan - Beautiful colors. I like the tree on the left too. The rocks on the right almost look like half the silhouette of a person sitting. I'm not a fan of the road on the lower left though but cropping it out doesn't seem to work. Maybe darken it a bit more?

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    Hi Dan

    I too like the colour... and the tree, and Rachels suggestion. Dont have any other suggestions..

    DON

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    Beautiful color. Pity that it was from the wildfire. I agree with Rachel here but I am also struggling a bit with the lower right corner where things are in-between (not completely a silhouette and not exactly well exposed). However, the sun and the tree on the left that frames it almost makes up for the LR corner.

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    Hi Dan...great color in the sky...the silhouettes work for me...the roof tops of the buildings below seem to have a cyan cast to them - a minor fix.

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    Love the mood and the colors and the framing but the sun is much too close to the middle...

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