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    I captured this image last fall at Circle B Bar Reserve in Polk County, Florida. I worked up the image in Lightroom today. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    1/400 F/5.6 Matrix Metering +2/3 EV ISO 220 AWB, camera supported by a monopod
    Post processed in Lightroom CC and Photoshop CC
    Cropped for composition and presentation
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    Beautiful Pose the bird looks great in the frame , The BG is stunning and parch is outstanding here...

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    This is a very nice looking frame Joseph. The pose and the lighting are really nice and that background adds to the overall image. I might reconsider the composition though and maybe take some off the top and the right a little. Well done
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    Nice pose of this little fellow on the reed and great BG, Joe. I'd go for a little tighter crop if it was mine and maybe I would sharpen the head a little less. Well done.

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    Very nice pose and detail. The suggested crop top and right works for me, or an alternative is to carefully select the reed and lower the saturation a little in a gradient moving away from the bird. I would do both.

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    Very nice Warble shot, love the color, sharpness and background, agree with everyone cropping some, I vertical crop might work too.

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    Thanks everyone for viewing and commenting, very much appreciated. Regarding the crop suggested... I do have a version worked up as suggested, for this posting I added canvas to move the bird to the lower left side. Lightroom having Create Virtual Copy I work up different versions.
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    Great light and detail. I agree with comments re crop.

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