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Hi Gerhard,
Nice portrait here with fine details, sharpness throughout and a pleasing pose. I would try moving the bird off center with cropping from the right. I would also suggest including more of the perch but it looks like there may be other elements below which could be an issue. In either case a fine image.
Allen
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Gerhard maybe a little tight at the bottom but that apart it all looks very good to me,think the pose really makes it.
Keith.
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Yes very nice Gerhard,good pose great detail,agre on more view of the perch.TFS.
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Beautiful bird and love the soft light. I am envious... Sharp with a nice EXP but I think that the bird could go a bit lighter.
Image design: the bird needs to be more to our left with this great pose and the feet are too tight below. Do you have more room below and right? a
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Arthur Morris
Beautiful bird and love the soft light. I am envious... Sharp with a nice EXP but I think that the bird could go a bit lighter.
Image design: the bird needs to be more to our left with this great pose and the feet are too tight below. Do you have more room below and right? a
Thanks Arthur. Unfortunately no space left below and right. I have other images in this series that may crop better.
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Or you might be able to grab source material from one of those other images with which you can expand canvas... YAW. a
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