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    I haven't posted in an while, became involved in a couple things other than photography. That taken care of I'm back. This week I went to Circle B Bar Reserve capturing this image of a Limpkin. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Hi Joe,

    What a wonderful portrait! Everything looks tack sharp and the feather texture/detail is great :)

    I noticed a thin blue line on the upper bill (bordering the BG), near where plumage starts. Wondering what that might be ?

    The lhs and rhs feels slightly tight, perhaps a tad more space each side ?

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    Hi Ross, thanks for viewing and commenting. As many times as I looked at this image in post I did not notice the blue/purple fringing in that area. I worked on it in using the Lightroom tool to remove purple fringing and also in Photoshop Elements. I rotated the 4x5 crop for more background area on both sides. Thanks again, much appreciated.
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    Great work on the fringing Joe. The bird seems to have more breathing room now :) Lhs seems great. I am wondering if something was lost with that much more room on the rhs though? Also seeing in my minds eye how a square crop may work here. I am a bit uncertain about these things, would be interesting to see what the others think :)
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    Nice portrait, amazing details, Joe.

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    Amazing detail on the feathers. The bill and the eye are sharp and the whole image has a lovely quality to it. Beautiful portrait.

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    Truly a killer portrait and I knew it was yours without even looking at the name. I personally like the tighter first crop for this particular image.
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    Been pretty well covered above Joe, will be hard to get better than this.

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    Very nice portrait with the super details and nice colors. I prefer the OP as well. Great work, Joseph.

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    Nice clean detailed portrait. Great colors and I prefer the OP too. Well done
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    Excellent image Joe! I like the sharpness, IQ, details, BG and composition in the OP.

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    Perhaps simply doubling the amount of space in front of the bill (from the OP) would be good enough to give that bill a bit of space to breath. Good portrait otherwise with plenty of good detail, with only the sheen on the bill being a bit strong.

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    Great looking image Joe. Perfect details and colours throughout. That BG was made for this image, it 'fits' perfectly.

    Well done

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    Thanks everyone for viewing and commenting, very much appreciated.
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