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    Early morning, north lagoon Ft. Desoto, White Ibis feeding. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

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    Joe:
    I like the repeating poses, with no merges, and the center guy with just a bit of a different pose.

    The spacing of the birds gives a nice sense of depth.

    Pity the water wasn't a bit cleaner, to really perk up the reflections

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    Joe I always think of calm flat water when thinking about Florida but the slightly broken reflections are fine, agree with Randy you have got these birds very nicely spaced, nice work.

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    Nice composition, Joe. I like that you can see the eye of all the birds, except one.

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    I, too, like the comp lots Joe. Well done!
    Good contrast between birds and BG as well.
    A lower angle would've been smashing IMO!
    But, you did the best here given the setting.
    TFS!

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    Thanks everyone for viewing and commenting, very much appreciated.

    Akos, regarding being lower in capturing this image... if I went lower the front bird would be blocking two in the back. I wanted all of the birds showing, so this was a low as possible for that to happen. Thank you for your comment and suggestion.
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    Good reasoning behind the shooting angle. Well composed shot.
    Like it
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    Getting them all sharp is a big plus. Nice water would have put this over the top....
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    Joe:

    If circumstances allowed, moving to your right, and then shooting from a lower angle would have prevented a merge, but helped soften the effect of the debris in the water a bit. But, the comp. would have been subtly different, so perhaps this is the best available.

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