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    Ring-billed Gull, probably a second year gull, captured at Lake Mirror, Lakeland, Florida. Comments and critique welcomed and appreciated. Thank you for viewing.

    Nikon D7000
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    1/1600 F/5.6 Matrix Metering + 1 EV ISO 560
    Post processed in Lightroom 5 and Photoshop Elements 10
    Cropped for composition
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    Hi Joseph, great detail on the underwings and fanned tail. I like the high key finish in this, and wonder if you reduced the yellows, you would have a more accurate colour to the Gull.

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    Super nice details on the near wing. Good high key feel and the translucence on the feathers is pretty neat. I'd prefer less room right and below and I detect a bit of a green cast to some areas of the plumage. Adding a tiny catchlight would liven the subject.

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    Thank you Stuart and Daniel for viewing, commenting and suggesting improvements. I will revisit the original with your suggestions. Thanks again.
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