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    Hi all,

    Was looking for input on this Wilson's Warbler I took. I worked on it in RAW, but am wondering are the eyes sharp enough? Thanks for any help.


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    Here is another image of the same bird on another perch; I again worked in Adobe RAW to brush the bird and lower exposure as he was a tad hot. Eyes seem a bit better.

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    Hi Paul,
    Can you give us your EXIF data?
    A couple of things I noticed right away.
    1.is that you need to do noise reduction on the BG.
    The eye looks OK to me in both posts but I am on my laptop so I could be wrong.
    2.The composition needs to be different I think. It is too boxy for my tastes and I would change this to a landscape orientation.
    I would also get rid of the thin twigs below the bird.
    The exposure appears to be better in the second post. You have a lot less noise on the bird in the second post.
    Gail

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    Great observations and suggestions by Gail. I would only add a thought that you study some of the fine images posted on this forum and think about your composition. You don't have to crop this much in order to make a pleasing presentation.

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