Nicely done, Stuart. You did a good job of keeping everything sharp that should be. Love the colors of your young couple. One could wish they chose a more natural bed, but love is blind to such considerations...
Hi Stuart, the closer crop is a great improvement. The grasshoppers looked a bit lost in the OP. Sharpness, dof and BG look pretty good! I do think the perch is a bit overpowering because of the dark color and wood structures.
Fantastic detail captured! The saturated greens of the bkgd contrast nicely with the various shades of yellows & oranges of the grasshoppers. I much prefer the 2nd cropped post.