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    Dave Phillips
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    Not as romantic as most.....lol, just wrote this

    Over The Hill

    Here I am alone going over the hill
    The wind is calm and the waters still

    I've worked really hard and given my all
    But I feel a peace as I heed the call

    The light is getting brighter and my heart almost still
    As I go a little bit farther over the hill

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    Dave, Wow!! Most impressive!!! Your image speaks a thousand words-but your written words are so strong and deep. The last few words really got me-they fit perfectly together.

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    Fabs Forns
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    Very touching, Dave, it breaks my heart.

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    Ákos Lumnitzer
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    This is awesome Sir Dave! So meaningful, I can feel for the old horse. The picture matches perfectly. I sense the sadness, the reluctance of the end drawing near. :) Congrats!

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    I love it! The look of the horse totally sets the scene for that poem sentiment. You matched them perfectly and really did a wonderful job on both.

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    Superb, Dave. Touching. Heartbreaking. Beautiful.

    You say so much with so few words.

    As Denise said, the words and the image fit perfectly.

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    Wonderful, Dave.

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