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Stunning composition. Great szene. B&W works perfectly in this shot!
Markus
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Hi Morkel, great image, good choice of B&W. I have the same thought as Marc with respect to the foal position a bit too central. TFS. Loi
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Hi Morkel - this works very well with the isolated foal and then the wbs behind it. I also like the pano and the conversion. It would be interesting to see with the foal in the rule of thirds lower right if you have the space to do it but this works for me as is too. Only thing I might do is burn the ulc slightly as it appears lighter than the rest of the top border.
TFS,
Rachel
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Hi Morkel one of the rare occasions when the title just fit so perfect to the image ........... great job on that well thought.
Like the image as is would not change a thing .. Good conversion and the tones are looking very nice.
TFS Andreas
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A really nice moment, well seen as it must have been a long way off. For me, it's a little too high-key but that's just my taste. Otherwise, perfectly executed.
Ed
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Thanks for the comments, folks. I'm happy with the placement of the foal...could crop for the "thirds" placement but I prefer the balance of the overall scene/elements as is.
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Absolutely stunning in every respect, Morkel.
Your artistic vision with regard to the placement of the foal is in total alignment with mine. It doesn't strike me as 'central' in a way that degrades the impact of the photograph.
Indeed it demands to be in its present position, as the foal is 'central' to the story here, even though it is actually right-of-center in your presentation.
I offer that what I choose to call the 'Suggestion of Thirds', while it works often, as we've been conditioned to impose it -- is never mandated and should more often be ignored.
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It is very well done!
I love b/n for wildlife!
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Thanks Bill and Giovanni.