I'm not really sure what you want to be honest. Already a similar shot in the "Eager To Learn Image Critiques" forum. I'm sure they will be very useful in there. Yep, its over exposed Lance.
Hi Lance, in addition to what Alfred posted on your other thread about exposure....you might even try spot metering on the white bird directly and then opening up at least 2 stops......don't use any ev.
and yes, do get that highlight indicator turned on