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    This was taken at a local conservation area close to my house. All C&Cs are welcome and appreciated.

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    Very well done, Jim. I like the comp as presented. The pose, perch and BG are nice. The hint of branches in the back actually add an element which I like.
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    I like the angle of the perch and great pose and DOF on the bird. Good BG and the OOF grass on the is OOF enough not to distract...Very nice Jim!

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    Beautiful portrait, great details and eye contact.

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    Nice one, Jim. Great pose and comp. I wonder if just a 5% reduction in highlights using the s/h tool would help?

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    Lovely vertical comp, and I like how the sparrow is gripping the perch. Beautiful background. For me though the OOF grass is a mild distraction...I'd prefer none.

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    Good comp Jim, nice perch and the sparrow looks great, maybe a bit more contrast?
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    I definitely like the OOF grass in the background to add depth to the image. Nice detail and light. great colors.

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    Thanks everyone for the comments and suggestions.

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