David, they are a beautiful bird and you got some excellent detail, a nice background, and a good pose. I wish the light had not been such that you wound up with the shadow on part of the eye. Did you have some software that add's "fill flash" effects? Just my opinion.
Thanks Stan, the eyes are sunken n this bird and therfore difficult to avoid the shadows, I have lightroom 3 but use it sparingly a. because I am not very good with it and B. I am a bit old fashion with PP
Many thanks for your comments.