Only negative I see is the setting looks "domesticated". I like the light very much- those colors are showing really well thanks to your exposure. Might remove that reddish dot midway up the left side of the image?
I like the idea behind the image, well exposed and sharp as posted. I do wish the front bird was placed more to the left of the frame (actually, centered horizontally would have been ideal IMO) and I agree with the minor background clean-upsuggested. Well done overall!
The IQ is really nice here and the concept is good.
I would like to see a single bird photo, I would think you have one?
They are a very attractive species.