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    Canon 7D, Canon 400mm f4 DO, 1.4x TC II, monopod
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    Excellent sharpness, behavior, and pose. The green BG looks great. I could see a little more room on the left of the frame.
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    Fabulous flight pose. Nesting material in the beak gives artistic feel in the frame.Love pose and details on bird.

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    Excellent, love the pose and nesting material. super sharp with fine detail. Agree with Doug re more space
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    Wonderful flight shot ... great wing position, exposure, detail, and BG!
    Agree about more space.
    If this is a crop and you have enough room, might be nice to not have the nesting material clipped.

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    lovely image great exposure and focus nesting material makes it well done

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    already some good advice above on the composition aspects.

    Loved this one, Allen. really sharp and excellent exposure control. bird angle could not have been better. Well done. A pleasure to look at, this shot.

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    Lovely downstroke wing position and a good look at the face with a good head angle. Do you have more room all around?
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    Yes, more room all around is needed...otherwise excellent. I love the shadows between the primaries.

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    Here is a repost. That is all the room I have on bottom unfortunately. Thanks everyone for their comments...

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    Allen:

    Lovely bird, nice pose, sharp, well exposed,

    Looking at your original, I would consider pruning up the stick exiting the frame below, just enough to allow you to add a little canvas there. Depending on how much canvas you add below, might then trim a balancing amount off the top. I could also see a tiny trim off the right side to move him more to the right in the frame.

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