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    Roman Kurywczak
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    I had such a succesful week down in Florida......actual title should probably be #500! Good problem to have! Not my faorite format of crop (squarish) but that and the BG has grown on me. Would like your thoughts on that!
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    Very artistic pose, and sharp with great detail. The background looks great to me - does not distract from the beautiful birds.

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    Really like the interaction. Square crop works fine for me, as does the BG. Did you add a catchlight to the female's eye?
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    Tahnks Doug (and Laurie!),
    nope.....catchlight was there. Let's just say I was pleasantly surprise but it was her angle I'd guess.

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    I like the sharpness, interaction, details and BG. Well done Roman!

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    Lovely interaction, nice soft background and catchlight was a bonus.

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    I think just a little looser crop would look nice.
    Great action (again), but there is a bit of noise, Maybe a bit larger would fix that?
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    Breathtaking pose, Roman. I just love how he is enclosed by her wings. Such a dramatic image. Seems you really had a wonderful trip. Can't wait to see more!
    I do think I see some noise too and maybe a bit of smudging along the top of his right wing.

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    Love the interaction, behavior and light here. Just not sure about the crop. I am thinking space on the right. I would play with a few crops if you haven't already.
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    very nice interaction and good light
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    Exellent image quality, great details and sharpness.

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    Very well balanced and great action caught. Like the crop as is.
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    Superb interaction with catch, like the square crop as well, lovely shot Roman.

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    Roman:

    Great timing, love the intertwined poses. The diagonal lines of the wings work very well with a squarish crop. I do agree with Marina, that a sliver more on the right would be good.

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    Hi Roman, great interaction captured here, and love the exposure and detail on the whites on the male. Comp wise, I would add space on both sides and have them placed centrally - but I know how you like tighter comps.

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    Hi Roman I like the interaction to the corp for me is fine as is. A verry good image it is well captured.

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    Roman , this image Rocks. I love the behavior and knowing how small these guys are I know you worked for it. So glad to see some light on the eye of the female and you got a great soft bg.

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    well captured Roman,nice pose,I see a bit of noise,butnice capture.well done.

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    Perfect timing! Would apply some more sharpening.

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